my first attempt at rendering

[damiengibson]

here are my first attempts at rendering. i used a guide from rikard which improved the final results.

 

any comments welcome.

 

 

 

thanks

 

Damien

[damiengibson]

here is another i have just finished

 

[Haadee#525]

not bad,but the back is floating

[damiengibson]

not bad,but the back is floating

 

 

your not wrong, i still need to work on the finer points.

[The London Allstar]

Heres a tip, what i like to do when im rendering is to zoom out so that the area around the car has about half an inch of space between it and the edge of the picture.

 

In your first redner your zoomed in so that some parts of the car are not shown, imo zooming out will improve the overall outcome